Bake off

                                              Bake off by Zoe

As we started the bake off, I was full of excitement as a smile spread across my face. In my group I had Paige, Hannah, and me we were baking all spiced cookies, the other team was baking rainbow cupcakes. As we were making our mixture it went wrong the dough was to dry. A few minutes later the mixture was ready. Next we chose the shapes we wanted for our cookies, we chose hearts, horses, stars, and some other shapes. After a while, we finished the shaping of the cookies, and slowly slipped them into the oven. Ten minutes later they were ready, our team made the icing and slowly spread it on , with a flick of excitement. Meanwhile we sprinkled our popping candy, and sprinkles,onto our delicious, all spiced cookies. We were finished icing our cookies, moving onto a big mess to clean up.

A few hours later after our cake, it was time for the competition. Wolfgang tried the cupcakes and the all spiced cookies then Megan and shannon tried them, Wolfgang write which one he liked. 3,2,1 they all voted cupcakes. well done I said as I was full of joy, and moving onto the best movie how I shrunk my teacher.
                                            By Zoe 2018

After speaking with mr K, he said I am good with my figurative language and I have used a lot but I am putting my punctuation in some wrong spots. also I have used some vocabulary but I need to be more selective to move up to level 4. My goals are vocabulary and punctuation.