In writing we were trying to build our confidence for our Speeches so Miss Bennett gave us topics and we had to choose a group of three or two I went with My friends Mya and Neve. Our topic was veggie cruelty and when we were finished we had to read it in front of the class to practice for speeches.
Friday 21 June 2019
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Kia Ora Zoe, my name is Kyra and I am a Year 8 student in Totara 2 at Grey Main School. I like your post about "Veggies have feelings" because it is a good idea to do this to practice for your speeches for this year.
ReplyDeleteWe have also just finished doing our class speeches for this year. I did my speech on a dolphin that lived in the Malborough Sounds, what is your speech idea?
Maybe next time you could make sure your writing has all the right punctuation but otherwise, awesome work!
Kyra
Kia Ora, Zoe thank you for the help I am showing this to my parents as soon as I get home Veggie's deserve right's but how do you know they have feelings? have you got a secret talking to veggie's. that would be so cool. well kinda because I could be like hello potato and the potato could go oh hello there speaking of veggie's what are you favourite kind to eat (If you get forced to) my favorite is broccoli with cheese sauce anyway goodbye you did great
ReplyDelete-Alex From Greymain School